Wow, you are so good at writing... keep it up 5/5... ^_^

Wow amazing.. you sure have a tallent, I loved this poem

Wow! This is so amazing. I really loved this. It must be my new favorite and the greatest write I've read today. Keep up your wonderful work. The idea of this poem captivated me in many ways. I love inspirational poetry such as this one. 5/5

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Oh wow. this was just wonderful. i loved your wording and the whole poem just flowed. nothing i would change about it! 5/5

Tihis one is good 5/5 for sure

Wow.. you really have a way with words.. very very nice word choice and great flow... good description.. just a very beautiful piece all around.. but i think in this line "A clam and peaceful flow"

you meant "A CALM and peaceful flow"

Really good wording 5/5

This is really good. it's short, but says so much in a few words. it's a very well written poem that i'm sure a lot of people can relate to. keep writing 5/5

~Kristina

Short, simple, and it gets the point on target. Great job. :)

Wow again with an awesome poem..mi gettin jelous haha jkjk but still makes me go in awe a 5/5!

Short sweet and simple with such moving emotions. Another great piece by you. Although I liked the 2nd one better then this it was still worthy of a 5/5 definitly. Creative. Good work~mel

Wow...to me this poem was powerful! I love the words you chose even though most of it I don't understand since I'm dumb every morning. lol. Lovely poem. 5/5

Breathtaking. You capture your theme in a vivid detail that makes it wholly dreamy and pleasurable to read. Your description of the watercourse embodying dreams is neat, elegant, and well-thought-out. I truly enjoyed this piece, Miss Marcella.