Rancid

by Cella Bella   Apr 8, 2006


A rancid soul
Deprived of love
Unbeautiful,
Undreamed of

A laugh unknown
Is masked with lies
Heart unraveled
In a rotting disguise

Searching for answers
To defective questions
Like tiny cancers
Nobody mentions

Copyright 2006 Marcella

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  • 17 years ago

    by Riley

    It was very good :)
    Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This was a great poem
    it was deep
    and it was so beautiful, and yoru
    word choice was great
    and nice descriptions

    it was short
    but it
    was really good

    a well deserved

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Oh i just love everything you write. everything you write is soo beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Wow so deep, and soo beautifull... amazing words, and good use of poetic devices!!
    like tiny cancers???.. amazings comparsons!!
    well written.. good job :)

    <3 ang

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very beautiful and catching lines, the simple style is great and you have nicely written it. Well expressed mournful feelings plus a good flow.

    Searching for answers
    To defective questions
    Like tiny cancers
    Nobody mentions

    Beautiful lines :)