by Cella Bella Apr 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Look at all these losers |
by Debbie
Amazing to see the subject, while being annoyed at those 'losers', actually is concerned for them. How he seemed to perceive his surroundings actually reflects and reveals his real character -- a loser. In just a few words, you managed to encompass so much truth and lucidity. I adored it. Lovely work, as always! 5/5 ~Marian |
by Dawn Manna
Another wonderful poem...ur a great writer....keep up the amazing work 5/5 |
by Tom
Very good and very true |
by Sandra D
Again, this is so true! it flowed well, and i like how the rhymes weren'y forced. great job, ur an amazing writer!! |
I enjoyed this poem because it captured human-nature... keep it up 5/5 |