Quite a good poem :D |
I enjoyed this poem because it captured human-nature... keep it up 5/5 |
by Sandra D
Again, this is so true! it flowed well, and i like how the rhymes weren'y forced. great job, ur an amazing writer!! |
by Tom
Very good and very true |
by Dawn Manna
Another wonderful poem...ur a great writer....keep up the amazing work 5/5 |
by Debbie
Amazing to see the subject, while being annoyed at those 'losers', actually is concerned for them. How he seemed to perceive his surroundings actually reflects and reveals his real character -- a loser. In just a few words, you managed to encompass so much truth and lucidity. I adored it. Lovely work, as always! 5/5 ~Marian |