Confession Pieces

by Lost & Delirious   Apr 8, 2006


An inner emotion rushes through me,
Desperate happiness, my soul invades,
Every feeling, trying to escape and leave,
From deep inside, to fly or run away.

My lovely sensation I want to share,
This intense secret, I wish to set free,
My heart's longing to scream loudly and yell:
"You're the only air that I want to breathe!"

But all confession pieces slowly slip away,
As memories and reasons pass by my mind,
Courage I had already gained starts to fade,
And every single desire is just left behind.

A never ending doubt surrounds my thoughts,
Useless silence, again keeps remaining,
What should I do now? Wait for love to come?
Since within me, my love I keep saving.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. I liked the title. It's unique. and I definitely get where your coming from with the meaning of the poem. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    This is really a neat piece of writting...express many emotions

    Favorite Part:

    My lovely sensation I want to share,
    This intense secret, I wish to set free,

    I know the feeling

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    I like, Good job, nothing else i can really say...Its a deep poem, great emotion, keep up the good work,
    your friend Al

  • 18 years ago

    by Allen

    Well done, that was really well written. The emotions you expressed, *mwah* i love it. I really like the 3rd stanza, i can reallyl relate to that. Keep it up. A job well done. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Russell

    Very good poem..well written.The flow was good and everything just was natural..i didnt notice anything forced in it.You're very good.Keep up the good work. 5/5

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