I didn't really get the title. I mean, I did with the line but it just seemed awkward a bit. I did like the lines in the poem and it did seem to express what you wanted it to. I liked the personification of the heart saying the person's the only air it wants to breathe. I thought that was a nice touch. I don't think the last line needed a question mark, though.

Wow this one is my favorite between the two definitly..

i love this stanze

But all confession pieces slowly slip away,
As memories and reasons pass by my mind,
Courage I had already gained starts to fade,
And every single desire is just left behind.

Great job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This poem is really good!! you put a lot of emotion into it.. thanks for the comment :) 5/5
*rachel*

Wow this is really good!!! i love the way you write.. you let so many emotions out 5/5.. thanks for the comment :)
*rachel*

Lovely Poem so much Emotion.The flow was perfect. Great job, I loved the rythym and everything. (=

Very good poem..well written.The flow was good and everything just was natural..i didnt notice anything forced in it.You're very good.Keep up the good work. 5/5

Well done, that was really well written. The emotions you expressed, *mwah* i love it. I really like the 3rd stanza, i can reallyl relate to that. Keep it up. A job well done. 5/5

I like, Good job, nothing else i can really say...Its a deep poem, great emotion, keep up the good work,
your friend Al

This is really a neat piece of writting...express many emotions

Favorite Part:

My lovely sensation I want to share,
This intense secret, I wish to set free,

I know the feeling

This is really good. I liked the title. It's unique. and I definitely get where your coming from with the meaning of the poem. Great job on this! 5/5