by Mark Apr 8, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You call me your 'friend', |
by jess
Hey hun!! another great poem. im running out of things to say when i comment now ive done it so much!!! hee hee hee |
It was rough around the edges but had a great plot and a good point that u got across...work more w/ your wording and vocab, other than that grrt job! ur a good writer w/ alot of potential... |