Wow, absoultly a great peice of work. I loved it. I am sure alot of people can relate. This poem is full of emotion and uses great Flow and Rhyme. good Job.

~Joe~

I love this poem, it pulled at my heart strings, you are a very talented writing and i can see theres a lot of depth in this poem, if you could please comment on some of mine it would be much appreciated, and if u ever need to talk im here,
love cass xoxo

Brillaintly written, ful of some strongly protrayed emotions. it has a good flow and holds attention well

5/5