by Fay Apr 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Their painted smiles and faces, |
by MemoirsOfMe
I think this is the best of yours I've read. It was magnificent and flowed nicely, and alot of the lines were well structured. Though, just a tip in my opinion, you shouldn't use exclaimation points. Your lines don't need any emphasis... it has enough of how it is, simple and beautiful. |
by Milton
Loved it, I've been feeling the same way. It's sad, but good stuff. ;) |
by PaperHearts
Awwwwwwwwwwwwe its a meaninful poem i like it :) |