All Fake!

by Fay   Apr 8, 2006


Their painted smiles and faces,
Saying things they don't really mean,
Leaves me in an empty hole with no spaces,
It's all fake because it's what I've always seen.

They say they care, and that they will always be there for you,
But when the time really comes, they are never there,
Why say something that your not really up to?
They see you suffering, but they do nothing besides stare.

Sick of all their lies!
Sick of all the pretend,
What happened to our close firendship ties?
It's something I will never comprehend.

Who are they?
I will never really know,
They are speechless with nothing to say,
The truth will always glow!

They make you feel like a different creature,
Or from another world,
It's as if you have a weird feature,
It doesn't make sense, just like when cotton is curled.

Their painted smiles and faces,
Saying things they don't really mean,
Leaves me in an empty hole with no spaces,
It's all fake because it's what I've always seen.

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  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I think this is the best of yours I've read. It was magnificent and flowed nicely, and alot of the lines were well structured. Though, just a tip in my opinion, you shouldn't use exclaimation points. Your lines don't need any emphasis... it has enough of how it is, simple and beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    Loved it, I've been feeling the same way. It's sad, but good stuff. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by PaperHearts

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwe its a meaninful poem i like it :)