Awwwwwwwwwwwwe its a meaninful poem i like it :)

Loved it, I've been feeling the same way. It's sad, but good stuff. ;)

I think this is the best of yours I've read. It was magnificent and flowed nicely, and alot of the lines were well structured. Though, just a tip in my opinion, you shouldn't use exclaimation points. Your lines don't need any emphasis... it has enough of how it is, simple and beautiful.