by Mark
This was a real good poem.. nice work.. pretty emotional though :( |
Hey you're just as good if not better than me so don't worry bout it. Hey don't be sorry if you ain't perfect no one is even if they seem to be so its all good, just look positive and you'll get what you need :D |
by Fay
Wooooow this is such a touching poem, I can relate to it myself. Your really good, I think poems are the best way to express your feelings and your surely good at it ;) keep up the good work. |
by Jenna Balkin
Wow, |
by Robiie
Cassie that is so beautifuly written, it has a lot of emotion coming through the words |
by leilani
Wow, loved it. lots of emotion. thanks for the comment, your a great writer yourself. keep up the good work. |
Hey that's really good. You make the person reading it feel what you feel. By the way thanks for the comment on my poem =). Bye xoxox Summer |
by Colby
Great poem. No one is perfect, yet no one will ever see that within someone else. People are always judgemental, it is good you can express your feelings like this in poetry. |
by Dre
That was a great poem, i can relate to that, well dont worry nobodys perfect in any way, sometimes i feel that way, well keep up the gook work, your doing great. |
This is just amazing. your poem, is so strong, so...emotional. there is just raw feelings, i can relate. this poem was one of the best that i've read. keep up the great work, i just loved it. if its ok with you, i was wondering if i could post this as a blog, on myspace. i'll give all credit to you. |
by Courtney
This poem is very deep. The way you incorporate rhyming and meaning is brilliant! *PS* Thanks for commenting me on my poem! |
by Bryon
Wow that was too good, too deep like you |
by silvervein
Wow... this is stunning. i like it. |
by simplysoso
WoW, this is a great poem, and I can relate to it a lot. Especially about being the nonperfect daughter..feel it and know it with my parents. Good Job and keep up the great talent. |
This is a really good poem. You seem like a very good poet. Keep up the good work. Thank you for reading my poems. Sincerely, |
by **~xoxo~**
That was a super awesome poem.. you showed your true meaning and you got yor point across.. I hope to see more from you and if you want you can comment on some more of my stuff.. i've been attempting to write more stuff but its been hard so yeah look out for new stuff.. thanks good job.... |
Wow... that waz intense!!! I think it waz great!!! well i'm kinda new 2 da site but i really lyk it so far thnxc 4 da comment!!! |
by Debbs
Hey nice poem i know where ur coming from |
by mayana
I love this poem (= |
by Kylie
Wow, this is an amazing poem. I liked how you made people reading it feel the pain your felt. Your choice of words and phrases really brought it out. |