Comments : My Last, Imperfect Breath.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    This was a real good poem.. nice work.. pretty emotional though :(

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Hey you're just as good if not better than me so don't worry bout it. Hey don't be sorry if you ain't perfect no one is even if they seem to be so its all good, just look positive and you'll get what you need :D
    Loves And Lata
    |Mia|

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Wooooow this is such a touching poem, I can relate to it myself. Your really good, I think poems are the best way to express your feelings and your surely good at it ;) keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Wow,
    I can relate to some of your words here...
    You think im a good writer..well i think your an excellant writer...
    I love these types of poems that express so many emotions,
    Keep it up ok!? :)
    Oh! and thanx for your compliment on my latest poem 'She called upon a demon'
    Love Jen

  • 18 years ago

    by Robiie

    Cassie that is so beautifuly written, it has a lot of emotion coming through the words
    i love you so much gorjuz
    please take care and im always here for you
    i love you x0x0

  • 18 years ago

    by leilani

    Wow, loved it. lots of emotion. thanks for the comment, your a great writer yourself. keep up the good work.
    leilani

  • 18 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    Hey that's really good. You make the person reading it feel what you feel. By the way thanks for the comment on my poem =). Bye xoxox Summer

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    Great poem. No one is perfect, yet no one will ever see that within someone else. People are always judgemental, it is good you can express your feelings like this in poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre

    That was a great poem, i can relate to that, well dont worry nobodys perfect in any way, sometimes i feel that way, well keep up the gook work, your doing great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This is just amazing. your poem, is so strong, so...emotional. there is just raw feelings, i can relate. this poem was one of the best that i've read. keep up the great work, i just loved it. if its ok with you, i was wondering if i could post this as a blog, on myspace. i'll give all credit to you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    This poem is very deep. The way you incorporate rhyming and meaning is brilliant! *PS* Thanks for commenting me on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryon

    Wow that was too good, too deep like you
    my lost for words

  • 18 years ago

    by silvervein

    Wow... this is stunning. i like it.
    you are very honest with yourself..
    and its very very VERY emotional.
    keep on writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by simplysoso

    WoW, this is a great poem, and I can relate to it a lot. Especially about being the nonperfect daughter..feel it and know it with my parents. Good Job and keep up the great talent.
    Cass

  • 18 years ago

    by Zelda Sylvestro

    This is a really good poem. You seem like a very good poet. Keep up the good work. Thank you for reading my poems. Sincerely,
    Zelda Sylvestro

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was a super awesome poem.. you showed your true meaning and you got yor point across.. I hope to see more from you and if you want you can comment on some more of my stuff.. i've been attempting to write more stuff but its been hard so yeah look out for new stuff.. thanks good job....

  • Wow... that waz intense!!! I think it waz great!!! well i'm kinda new 2 da site but i really lyk it so far thnxc 4 da comment!!!

    Luv,
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbs

    Hey nice poem i know where ur coming from

  • 18 years ago

    by mayana

    I love this poem (=

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. I liked how you made people reading it feel the pain your felt. Your choice of words and phrases really brought it out.

    Great work, you are very talented.

    x.xBrokenx.x