Comments : My Last, Imperfect Breath.

  • 18 years ago

    by MuRdErFaCe

    I really like this poem, i can really relate to it, which is really good. the flow of it is very nice and i really enjoyed it keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    This is an awsome poem! I feel that way sometimes too! Good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by [amanda*]

    Love is abt acceptin e person for hu they are girl..hope 1day u'll find some1 hu does..this poem is written wif such emotion..5 fr me
    thx for e comments.. =)
    love, amanda**

  • 18 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    LOVE IT

    its EXACTLY me .. everything, every word

  • 18 years ago

    by Caroline

    Really good. keep writing you have talent!