It reads perfectly. This poem is so emotional and full of all these personal feelings. That really shows through. I love it.

Keep writing and take care,

Elle Stevens xx

Hi hunny, this is beautiful.. I only recently found it, but it meant a lot, and at your age, it's great that you write so incredibly, yet sad that you know such pian. I hope that in time, you can draw on your creativity, and see those silver linings on the clouds. If you can count your friends on more than one hand, they're rarely really friends, but this site is a real community, and I'm sure you can find it here, that not everybody will let you down in your life. I'm 29, and still searching, but everybody here needs you, as much as you need them, to critique, to be honest, and to be loved.
Keep up the writing, it's fantastic. xx

So much emotion in this poem , i love it...well done, n thanx for the comment

I loved the poem. you are a great writer and it does make sence. Dont say you arent. i especially loved this stanza
Scarlet splashes on the wall
Scarlet slashes on my wrist
Scarlet drips down my face
But how can I resist?
AND...
the other one about red is not beautiful!
I thought it was just written beautifully!
Much lovesss
Amberinaa*

I love alot of your poems actually...hehe...
but this one is one of your best i think...