Of course this poem is beautiful, along with the rest of ur poems!! my fave lines are..
No one knows of her pain and suffering,
there all to busy living there lies.
society is so blind to the problems around us, the ppl around us.every1 is alwas too busy living in their false worlds. we all need to wake up and realize whats going on in the world. but unfortunatly, we dont live in a perfect society. anyways back to ur poem:P great job! i loved it. keep it up

Great job... that was so true. god is always there no matter what we go thru, he is waiting for us to run back to him so he can lift us into his arms and touch the scars and tell us we are okay.

Wow hun. This is amazing... such raw emotion and it comes deep from the heart. You are very talented and I hope you know that.

I thought id msg you through one of your poems lol..a great one might i add!:> im doing great..i have my exams this week so ive been studying like crazy..and it SO wierd that you msg'd me because just today i was thinking about you!! well i hope your doing great! ill talkto you soon!

WOW! this poem i s awesome ! really love it and its such a beautiful end to it! its good to see someone with such strong faith! thanks xXx