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by Vegetable
Again really well done, and very true. The only problem I have it that this bit "That the anger would not show. By told you're useless Told to leave, just to go" doen't make much sence, I think the "by" throws me off a bit. But it could be just me.
by xxxStarSxxx
Very good. the only thing that gets me mixed up a bit is this line: "That the anger would not show. By told you're useless Told to leave, just to go" The "by" kinda makes it...idunno. anyhow i think it just thorws me off but other than that....5/5 Great work!