My wish?... 'I want to die' *wierd*

I didn't form the sentence in my head, it really did just fall out of my mouth.

Not that I plan too. For years. Wierd huh? Which is why the poem isn't finished. Cos i'm not sure where It's going, or where i'm going.

*tilts*

''Birds fly over the rainbow, Why then oh why, can't I''

;)

This is amazing as always Avellana, your poems are seriously spectacular. i love this and i can relate to it.

Ah wow! Excellent poem, the last stanza so relates to me, I felt the true emotion in this poem. It lure me in until the end, and even though it doesn't have one topic to dwell upon, I like that because it can get you thinking.Keep it up! xxx

Hey i love that last stanza!! it describes how i feel so much of the time and relates to me in so many ways!! i loved this poem and cant wait for part 2! love ya EJ

Hey i read a comment u posted....i think i have a poem that u somehow maybe able to relate to....its calld not good ewnough. damn im acting a bit weird these days dont mind this if u dont ha ve time lol ...bye

Wow...
well ..lets just say.. . . Picture what u commented on my poem (the whole jaw dropping, ears perking, sitting up straight thing) and times those sensations by..101...omg girl this was amazing. Totally had me enthralled from beginning to end, or shall we say, not-so-much end.
ive asked myself that soo many times..the same question and the way u wrote about left me breathless and quite certain that u must keep writing:)

take care of urself sweetie.
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