Great poem, its true? Wow! well I can't think of any ways for you to improve it, or a title, sorry, bye great poem again.

U hav talent for someone that seems so low.....so sad....i kno wut its like to be made fun of or hated....believe me i do...i read ur prof and to comment on the frend trusting thing...ur right and i dont rely on anyone anymore cuz they screw me over in the end no matter how much i give.....grrt poem and beautifully written....
love ya lots,
sore

Im srry if i offended u in my last comment...i merely meant that w/ such depression i am surprised that u can hav such an interesting outlook on life....i write wheni am sad but i cant write like that necessarily....good job, thx or ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

Great Poem! If that is true, I'm sorry! You are a great writer! Keep up the awesome work!

-- *Amber Faith.* ©

You have a gift with poetry. You have a beautiful mind and soul. Any one who cant see that from reading your work in a 'tard. Be yourself, i dont care how people see me, there's no point conforming to the unrealistic stereotypes people enforce. keep writin, x

I think your poem was awesome. It showed how life can be. And its what probably alot of ppl agree in. It really was a gr8t poem! ^_^

Awh, Wow its sad. Great poem tho. I hope thats not how you feel. I used to feel like that its hard i no.. But you just have to belive in yourself more.. i helps a bit. But of course you still feel down when people call your names. But what can you do thats life. Anyways i loved the poem your a awsome writier.

P.s thanx for commenting on my poems it really means alot. Much love Amberinaa*

This poem is REALLY great, i love how ou show your feelings and how you act because of them...deep..great!