Question?

by Sophi[e]   Apr 8, 2006


You say: This is madness
We're all one person less
How are you here?
There is no one near.

Can you see in the dark?
Bypass the swings in the park.
Left in this lonely room
I locked you in, so you assume.

Now I've been driven insane
You're the one to blame
Whispers said in your head
Maybe you're the insane one instead

Listen to them beats
Pass my soul in the streets
House number three to house number four
Blood painted all over your door

The life of me dies,
The sparks leave my eyes.
Just check there is no one behind
Could they be my thoughts repeated in your mind?

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    For the first stanza or so i couldn't understand what on earth this peice was about lol. but it all comes clear in about the 3rd stanza making the entire peice become a very well written peice.

    the structure is good, the questions work very well and the flow is very smooth. good peice overall

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