by ghastlyshadows Apr 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Grey eyes gaze into mine, stealing toward my depths |
Appreciate your kindness, but i kinda like your poems better. |
by Tears
Very good !! i like this poem but you gotta start to trust people. Dreams do come true , Lies can change into truth but if you sit in your room and do nothing bout it and being afraid of pain will never change you. Lol not trying to be a preacher but reading you poem made me feel that u feel this way but great poem! |
Nicely done. Your beginning set up something different than what the ending showed. Well done for that twist and the words though plain were strong for the piece. |
Well Well Well, being a man its hard for me to comment on this one but i'll as u wrote a very powerful poem here. |