OMG!! That was very touching.. I'm so sorry if you have gotten hit.. But great poem

Hey all! Thanks for all the comments. This didnt exactly happen 2 me, but sumthin similar 2 it. I grew up watchin my dad beat my mom & alot of times she was close to actually dying so thats why I wrote this poem kuz she got out of the marriage just in time to save herself and her three kids! I'm glad ya'll liked and thanks for the nice comments! Make sure ya'll check out my other poems and comment&vote that would mean alot to me! Thanks again ya'll keep ur heads up and take care!
Much Love Alwayz,
Melinda

Hey I want 2 thank u all again 4 the kind comments I really appreciate them and it encourages me 2 keep writing! I just wrote "Beat To Death Part II" make sure 2 check it out it's about what 1 of the daughter's life was like! I would appreciate feedback on that also! Thanks again!
Much Love Alwayz, Melinda

awwww this poem is sad I have a tear keep up the good work im gonna go read part 2 kk

WOW!!!! THATS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!

WOW!!!!!!! this was a GREAT

WOW!!!!!!! this was a GREAT

THIS POEM WAS GREAT IT EVEN BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYEZ LOVED IT KEEP IT UP!!

MUCH LOVE,
CHEYENNE