Senryus(3)

by PS   Apr 9, 2006


One:
You say God crys
when it rains, but he spits and laughs
God pranks on humans

two:
Time goes one ahead
rushing me to the end of
my freedom and life

three:
sitting in the front
is no fun when teachers spit
whenever they speak

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    "You say God crys
    when it rains, but he spits and laughs
    God pranks on humans"

    In order for this to be a proper senryu, you would have to make the lines look like this:

    "You say God crys when
    it rains, but he spits and laughs
    God pranks on humans"

    And there is one spelling error:

    *crys should be *cries

    The first senryu was my favorite one to read in this selection. Very nice.

    //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    LOL i liked it the end made me laugh

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