LOL i liked it the end made me laugh

"You say God crys
when it rains, but he spits and laughs
God pranks on humans"

In order for this to be a proper senryu, you would have to make the lines look like this:

"You say God crys when
it rains, but he spits and laughs
God pranks on humans"

And there is one spelling error:

*crys should be *cries

The first senryu was my favorite one to read in this selection. Very nice.

//Ari\\