Hero(nonet)

by PS   Apr 9, 2006


Sharp slashing steel silver blade; a sword
carried by the man in black cloth
mask hiding his secret face
an iron mask or silk
the brave fight for those
with only few.
a zorro;
fighter
hero

somebody wanna find me a word that is one sylable and can take the place of hero?

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Not bad at all.. Im not sure what you could use for the last line.. Id say "brave" would fit, but i dunno since you already used it a few lines above. but its just a suggestion ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is wonderful... A hero's poem... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Intriguing thoughts. The piece was interesting and well done. Your words were nice.
    ~S3I -Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by {Miss} [A][L][L][I][S][O][N]

    Hey the poem was good but isn't hero 2 syllables??

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