Wow this is amazing. its so ironic and unique. ive never read anything like this. this is something like what im going through. not nessacarily my best friend but a good one. awesome. i love:
When I see her I wish she were mine,
To hold and love on her,
When did I gain a crush on my best friend?
I truly don't remember,
nice job!

I think because it's different that's what makes it a truley good love poem. It seemed long but it was attention getting. I don't know structure wise but the organization was great, word choice excellent, and I usually base on creativity and I loved it. Maybe one or two sentences were a bit akward, though

Wow, Awesome Poem. I loved it. it was very unique for this type of poem, but that is what makes it good. Keep up the good work!

~Joe~

Wow. I really like this poem. how the way you wrote it as a spell. it works really well. The flow and rhyme is just so well written together. i love it.

That was good, i enjoyed it, well done
xxxxxxx

Aww such a sad and sweet poem, and very original with the use of two letters
"It started out as this warm sensation,
That conjured in my chest,
Slowly it became the butterflies in my stomach,
And the burning emptiness in my breast,"
Aww I loved that bit, descibing the literal feeling inside
I love this poem =]

I have a friend who means just as much to me!!!