Wonderful poem. very good way of telling your emotions and how you feel.
very good poem once again.

Dang this is a really good one keep it up 10/5

That is really really good!!! keep up the good work!!

This is a good poem

all the best and take care
5/5

Is this all true???? It is really good i like it alot..

I love it, amazing flow to it, is all i can say

Wow... awesome!!! Very well written and very heartfelt. Keep it up, you're great in writing. 5/5

Thanks so much for commenting on mine. :-)

Love it. I'ts really good. Nice job dude.

Excellent poem. keep it up and thnx for the comment

Thats an amazing poem i love it! thanks for the comment

Hey, wow is all i got to say....that was like the meaning of mine... "The Intoxication" just yours is more detail of course i made mine in a class lol...that funny thing is thats how i feel in 6th period haha well GREAT GREAT POEM keep going!!!

katelynn

I really like ur poems ur really good. by the way thanx for the vote and comment.

DUDE! that was WAY good, I love it!!!
Thanks again for comenting my poem!

I've already read and commented on this poem. After reading your comment I got a chance to read it again. I really loved this poem. I adore the way you ended it. Great job. Thanks for commenting on mine. :-)

Wow it was really good! thanx for comment on mine...yeah, i really appreciate it! I'll check back on some of your others as well. People seem to love your work....

amanda

Heyyyy
sweet poem, sweet tittle and the rhyme was gr8
I luved it the idea was inspiring and soooo wonderful
I just dunno wut to say, ofcourse thanx for ur sweet comment I luved that and its ok its not that late hehe
Hope to talk soon
Much Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxX

Beautiful poem and rightly titled. Impulse-why didn't I think of that? *smiles* Great job once again!

This poem is very beautiful! Great Job! you really described your emotions well. My favorite stanza was:

I cant help the way your words become my obsession
It seems that the sense of reality is no longer in my possession
I cant help but tremble every time our eyes meet
It seems like in this battle you have won and caused my defeat

Great Job!! I loved it. 5/5*

Beautifully done, such wonderful impluses, you should just let them flow, Wonderful penn!!!

Aww that is such a str0ng, well written p0em! that is a beautiful p0em and u sho0d be very pr0ud 0f urself, 5/5!
thanx 4 c0mmenting 0n my p0ems
l0ve maddy x0ox