by angie A Apr 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
* i know it does not rhyme though most of my poems do. give me a break, I'm trying something new |
by Jennifer
This is a very good poem..it rhymes i some ways...a poem is not judged i believe on rhyme...it's judged on feeling and you have a lot of that in this poem...very good :) 5/5 rating |