by MoMo Apr 9, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You treated everyone that loved you like crap |
by Just_Andrew
Man i can relate.. alothough structure coulda been more ordered.. anways 5/5 |
Good poem... about the poem I wrote that you commented on, the repetition of YouB itch is the flow of my poem (every other line). Poetry needs to flow or else it's not really a poem it's just words. Thank-you for your comment though. |