You

by MoMo   Apr 9, 2006


You treated everyone that loved you like crap
now you lost them
you have no idea how much you hurt us
we loved you and all of a sudden you go and call us names, treat us like servants, and worst of all we took it from you and still loved you
you lost us
you were always there for us and then one day everything changed
we wondered "what did we do wrong?"
now i realize that we did nothing wrong....it was you who did something wrong
you betrayed us, you lied to us, you hurt us, but most of all you destoyed the love we had for you
now that i have had enough with it im letting you go!

© Mohammad Mohammad

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just_Andrew

    Man i can relate.. alothough structure coulda been more ordered.. anways 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    Good poem... about the poem I wrote that you commented on, the repetition of YouB itch is the flow of my poem (every other line). Poetry needs to flow or else it's not really a poem it's just words. Thank-you for your comment though.

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