Drugs

by Brook   Apr 9, 2006


Youre times almost up
Youre almost there..
Going out into that world
The one you cant bear

You think youre ready
For that breath of fresh air
But you cant breathe, lungs clogged
And you just dont seem to care

Youre falling under
The waters growing dark
Screaming out,but nobody hears
You just couldnt leave your mark

Now youre in the ground
The unevitable death we knew would be here
Unreachable at all now
But even now, we still see youre fear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Great poem, nicely written. I agree w/bridgette, not what you would expect form the title, but its a great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by GONE

    Great poem. Simple as that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good & definitely not what I expected from the title. But it's a great poem & I love the way that you ended it. The last line just kind of brought the whole poem together. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    Its a conflict of interest for me- if you get what i mean, but nonetheless its a really good poem, regardless if i agree with your views on drug use

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow hun very deep. It sounds like you put your heart into this one. For being 13 its great. Keep up the incredible work!!!
    !_I Lover Being In Love_!

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