Hay I read the whole story. It is an awsome story. For you could use this talent and do alot with it. Write more than just love storys, do adventure, but if you want you could add love to it. but keep up the great work. I'm going to do you a favor. For putting me on you fav. I'll put u on my fav.
Your friend- Aaron

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!