by Ariana Apr 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Irony |
by PS
Wow this is so me. i love the repetition and the three 'un's. the organization is great too. its short but it has such a strong effect. nice job! |
by LadyPearl
Interesting topic, something that happens all the time in our lives |
by Stabbylou
Wow, excellent poem. It is so powerful, the way it's set out, it builds up with quite a strong, positive tone but it then comes crashing down- very sad. Nice poem once again, a great read. |
Good flow in this peice and a almost unique way of presenting it. |
Heyyyy, i liked this poem it was it good it worked well together and the words flowed all the way through. |