by Amanda Apr 9, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
You gave me your heart, |
by Fallen Angel
Beautiful, just beautiful. Really brilliantly written and I love the way that you broke up the poem towards the end before the final stanza, really helps to almost draw a line through it. Again the rhyme is flawless and the emotion you put into the poem comes across so beautifully. Superb 5/5 x |
by azlan26
Very sweet poem, but very simplistic |
by Ann Stareyes
Amanda |
by Just Wishes
A lovely poem . written in a smart way. |