A lovely poem . written in a smart way.

all the best

Amanda
A lovely write and I love ya girly....great job...you'll always be my friend....

love ya, Ann

Very sweet poem, but very simplistic
My friend liked it a lot and thinks you are well cool
The simplistic approach worked and I thought it was great
Well done

Beautiful, just beautiful. Really brilliantly written and I love the way that you broke up the poem towards the end before the final stanza, really helps to almost draw a line through it. Again the rhyme is flawless and the emotion you put into the poem comes across so beautifully. Superb 5/5 x