Words

by Rose   Apr 9, 2006


How can you love with a heart so true, when the love that you have, is no longer what you knew.

It hurts me to think that what we have is now gone, and I\'m searching my heart for where our love went wrong.

My kisses you say are no longer enough, and the love we embrace seems a battle to tough.

You belittled and bemeaned me till i found my self lost, and i cant find my way back and it was our love that you cost.

I cant do this no longer i need to find, the real me that our love led blind.

Just let me be, and don\'t speak a word, for the words that you speak were the words that were heard!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. I hope things are okay, You said in the post your poems are your inner feelings. Im sorry for the pain you are expreriencing, But great poem! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is truly heartfelt. i cant feel the emotions. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is very well written and constructed. it shows how you're feeling very clearly and holds the readers interewst thoughout

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is very well written and constructed. it shows how you're feeling very clearly and holds the readers interewst thoughout

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow .. I love this one.. i think its my favorite of yours so far.. your such a amazing poet.. im definitly adding you to my favorites.. your amazing.. i especially like this line

    It hurts me to think that what we have is now gone, and I'm searching my heart for where our love went wrong

    Great write 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

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