Where To Start

by Sean Dohr   Apr 9, 2006


The worst is when you love someone,
as more than just a friend.
She teases you and flirts with you,
to you it's not pretend.

All her friends will tell you,
"I think she likes you too."
You'll knod and shake your head,
as if you already knew.

But, inside you are always questioning,
if to her it's just a game.
But, you're in love, it makes no difference,
to you it's all the same.

You sit with her when your alone,
and try to take things further.
No further than a hug or kiss,
and she's labeled you a pervert.

Now things are all messed up,
because you had thought wrong.
She didn't really like you,
you were right all along.

Sometimes, when you're in love,
you take things more to heart.
When it comes to women,
men have no clue where to start.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I liked the way you translated love. It was great, not at all cliche - great rhymes. It really worked for me. Thanks!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Awwwww :( well it wasnt the guys fault in that case, she shouldnt have led him on that way. good poem.. sad though

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. I can certainly relate to this poem... I especially liked the phrase "Sometimes, when you're in love, you take things more to heart." ... so much truth in that. Great write. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    This poem was so cute!!! It seemed like it took a lot of thought!!!! I see you winm qutie a few contests, so keep up the good work!! Ur one of a kind!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a lovely poem and I thought that is was really sweet. I liked it and I bet that anyone else who reads it will like it too. Keep you the good work because you are really talented. 5/5

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