Why??

by Nanita   Apr 9, 2006


They act like they know me
they act like they care
but if they did
then why so unfair?
without you in my arms
i feel like crying
without you in my life
i feel like dying
the torture, the pain
i can't handle anymore
why break what's broken?
my hearts already torn
countless days go by
& i don't see your face
but know ill never leave
nobody can take your place
although you're to far
i know your love is near
even though i don't see you
your voice, i want to hear
as depression takes over
i start to cry
i turn to my parents
and simply ask: WHY?

*i wrote this a year ago. once again to my ex. *

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "why break what's broken?
    my hearts already torn"
    Thats my favourite part! Its heaps good, I like this poem alot... I always find that peoples earliest poems are usually the best because theyre so full of emotion, and the longer people write the more they're able to cope with their feelings and it seems as though they learn how to hide them also, and not write about them as much......
    This is a gd poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Honey Kisses 18

    Hey nana... its me.. kayla... this made me cry... well... u know y... ne ways.. love ya... great job hun...

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This write shows the pain and hurt that you must of felt at the time. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

    sadaddy