Without you i am nothing (for a contest)*~*

by ~*so*over*him*~   Apr 9, 2006


I'm trying to get over this,
to move on to someone new
but i feel like i am nothing
when i don't have you

without you life is pointless
it seems to just drag on
nothing seems important to me
now that you are gone

without you i am dying
all my energy has been drained
my heart is smashed to pieces
and my entire life is stained

without you i feel alone,
like i'm here all by myself
i am just nothing now
and there is no one here to help

my life is twisted, my mind is cold
i am starting to break down
i just can't be me anymore
because you are not around

the only time i felt happy
was when you were by my side
but now you're gone and over me,
and part of me has died

without you life is empty,
i don't have anything
and without you i am nothing,
because you were my everything

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Excellent poem - unfortunately, the last stanza crashes it a bit with poor rhyming - it may be better if you cut the last stanza out all together . . other than that - the poem was absolutely amazing! Incredibly well written.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Very lovely and cute one

    love

  • 18 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    Cute poem =]] well written, this is exactly how i felt about my ex. not anymore tho =]] 5/5