Hmm good, some of the rhyming is bit, well, simple, but the whole poem itself is great
the start reminded me of i was a good little girl ill

Its a good poem...4/5

This was really good, the flow was consistance although it got a little thrown off but i stillw as interested in it. another great piece.

Kat

Great poem. its so true. wonderfully written a great flow. i wanted to keep reading which is a mark of a great poem.

Well done, entered this in my competition, and although it didnt recieve a prize i liked it alot. It just seemed to common and the emtion wasnt really there for me but i liked it.