You Don't Love Me Anymore

by rachyBBY   Apr 9, 2006


As I look into your eyes
I wonder where it all went wrong
I still love you so very much
But where has you love gone?

There's no feeling in your eyes
No tear streaks on your face
No feelings for me in your heart
Your love has been erased

Your eyes are cold and distant
Your lips, they tell no lies
I know it's officially over when
You tell me your last goodbye.

I can't read your face at all
There's no expression there
You watch as tears fall down my face
And you still don't even care.

Quietly you just sit there
And watch me in so much pain
You say no words of comfort
When my tears fall down like rain.

You say goodbye one last time
And head straight for the door
As silently, my heart is breaking
Knowing you don't love me anymore.

Rachel Crombie--4//9//06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany Chu

    Omg i really like ur poem i feel for ya trust me i def kno how it feels

  • 18 years ago

    by nicolette

    I love your poem it sooooooo beautiful it really made me think you have a wonderfull gift

  • 18 years ago

    by Simply Me

    This is so beautiful and i sincerely mean that i rarely comment poems but this really deserves it .......

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow this is so sad =*(

    I love how you describe this breath moment so detailed. It's absolutely fantastic. I could see it all happen right in front of me, like a very dramatic movie.

    Beautifully written! Great use of words, and a fantastic flow..

    Excellent! Took my breath away, and made my eyes teary

    Lotsaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Aww, i wish we could all be in love, be happy, and smile, but we cant can we?
    This poem is awesome, its really well written and i loved it, not because it was sad, but because it was good.
    love Tara-Kay
    Check out my poems
    xxxx

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