Powerful message with beatiful haunting words. As an assault victim, I agree with the message that there should be a change so that attacks would not happen even if the person claims that they don't know what took over them.

You might want to correct minor spelling, though.

Ahhh stupid spell check! Thanks I really appreciate that ladies!

HEY! that was totally awesome! Did you go to Aquire The Fire this year? I did. It was amazing. Im going to go next year too. If you did, can you comment or send me an email, thanx!

-Bloomed Rose

Chels ,

Very powerful poem with such truthful meaning . So much craziness in this world that it makes you wonder if there will be any room left for happiness in 50 years from now .....
And yes ! it definatly is time to take a stand .
Take care A.I.D , keep up the powerful writing ............XXXXX

WOW! Very powerful, meaningful and moving. We should all take a stand and do what is right! Sing it loud for the world to hear. If only they would listen though *sigh*. Beautifully written!

Yeah basically. im totally with you. this world is fraking insane. amazing poem. totally hit it.

Chelsey-Lynn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!! This is brilliant! Truly inspiring! I wish everyone in the world could read this. If it wouldn't inspire them to do something then nothing will. Lo9ved it ten times over!! Excellent!

Thought I'd take a look at vintage Chelsey, and man am I glad I did! This is fantastic! And before I go any further, Favorited! It's such a powerful piece, full of candidness and raw emotion. It's hard to watch the world go by in the state that's it in, especially to see how much it's changed in just 6 years. Even after Jesus warned us how bad it would get, you're just never prepared, when you finally witness it, firsthand. Great poem, Chelsey. Keep crying out to God, and he'll deliver us soon enough :)