Vey well written peice, flows very well and is very clearly portrayed thoughout

5/5

Good job. There were so many good words and the flow was incredible. It didn't sound forced and the thoughts were clear and concise. Well done.
~S3I -Faith

This was really good. Loved how your repeated that same stanza at the start, And then at the finsih! Great job! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Great job... you did it a good job at writting your feelings through words.

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Wow hun...oh my god.
An absolutely amazing poem.
There are so many lines that jumped up at me, and made me think, i can't even begin to explain.
It's not wrong to be such a caring person, it's not wrong to be hurt and upset, for heaven's sake girl, it's not wrogn to be you, to be what makes you ...you.
I love you sweetie..email me please!
xoxoxoxoxo