by Italian Stallion Apr 9, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
~Collaboration with Marjan~ |
by milly
I think this is my favourite one of yours that I have read, I felt that the rhyme scheme worked really well and that the rhythm flowed much more smoothly than some of your other writes. I loved the imagery you used...it really helped me to visualise the poem's meaning..good job! |
by Jason
Another great poem, while reading it, it definately painted a picture in my mind. Good stuff. |
by Cyma Khan
Best of luck dear... |
Very nice collab you two! |
It was really good. i like the ryme pattern that it has. good job! :D 5/5!! |