Wow. i really like this. its very strong and powerful. the message stands out and it has an extremely good structure to it.perfect.

Kat

I dont think this is your best work. there are a few very minor changes i would make to help it sound smoother, i.e. "heart's" to "heart is" in the last line. but it was still a good poem.

Very good poem. A good lesson to be learned. I like the religious touch to this.

I loved this one. So full of passion. Great ob 5/5 Loretta