Wow Kaylee. This, this is very deep. I loved it, just like alot of the other poems you have written. It was different from the rest, which makes it sound so beautiful. Your words tell that you have much greater whisdom that you haven't yet revealed to anyone else. I wish I could see just how great a whisdom that was.

-a friend-
Artimis

Deep, beautiful, emotional and poweful. An incredibly written piece. Your words so carefully chosen. A very good write :)

Wow this poem was soooo amazing.. you had an excellent choice of words.. excellent job.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This is an amazing poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful! Keep writing. 5/5

The lexical choice in this poem is very good. It is very beautiful and full of emotion, which is what i like to see. keep it up x

Wow, great write. I loved it. Very emotion filled. Great Job. Keep up the amazing peices of work.

~Joe~

All I can say after I read your poems is "wow.." You're such a talented writer and this poem is very powerful. There's so much emotion that I can actually feel the words.

"Kiss the wounds from my body that
had been engraved there by another.
Suffering innocence being violated
Bacteria poison from his words."

This stanza was amazing...I can relate. Keep up the awesome work Kaylee, I love it! 5/5

~Kelly~

Beautiful sad penned, very touching with every line, anyway congrat from me, have a good day!

Love & peace.

bert.

Pour these tears into the clouds above
then let them shatter to the floor.

I'm not sure why, but i got the whole meaning of this poem through the simplicity of these two lines.

You are a great poet, and I thoroughly enjoy reading your work.

Wow, you really express yourself well. Good Imagery. 5/5

Beautifully conveyed with such sad undertones, quite heartbreaking. I absolutely love the imagery conveyed througout this piece. So enchanting.
This stanza really stood out to me....

"Restore the image from my mirror
that might have remained smudged.
Silver vials glimmering in the closet
holding droplets of stained faith."

Well done! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wonderfully written with good progression. very powerful and excellently convayed thoughout

5/5

So beautifully written - you never cease to amaze me :) This poem was exceptionally well written . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Wha

What to say, this poem is so beautiful that it made me speechless... i love the use of words and this poem is so deep, and so well written =) keep up the good work ;) 5/5

~StefQ

Wow its wonderful i love it i know ive said it alot but its true very descriptive you have a way with words good job

That poem was BEAUTIFUL!! The last two lines really brought it all together. & the wording you used was very imaginative. great job!! 5/5*

Wow thats intense. i like it. i just all these images flying at me. great choice of words. i love :
Kiss the wounds from my body that
had been engraved there by another.
and
Silver vials glimmering in the closet
holding droplets of stained faith.
great job!

Good choice of words...just overal pretty good. 5/5

Very nicely written poem. Great choice of words whilst expressing yourself very well.. That was a great poem. Keep it up