WOW. I have to say this was better them brillant. I absolutly loved it! You have a true talent. Don't ever stop using it! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Another brilliant write from you, you do indeed have great talent and potential to go on and be an even better writer, I hope in CC&P we can guide you to becoming that writer! You are already well on your way... well done!

I like the personifications in this poem, they really bring it to life. beatifully written. xx

Wow! Hey baby, this poem was really great, it really touched me. Your flow was powerful. You use of words was designed very well; I was really amazed by the great use of diction. "Envelope, engraved, sweep the ashes of the twinge, tender heartstrings which continue to throb, smudged, droplets of stained faith, Pour these tears," to name a few, really were placed well to bring your poem to life. You had a sad tone to your poem, but you went a step above that, bringing it to life with you imagery. I was really impressed love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow.... thats all I can really say. Very good. Keep it up.

Cool bananas..well written. id really like it if youd read mine and told me what you think. top poem, keep it up!

You always manage to capture pure beauty in your writes and leave the reader dazzled with a powerful and emotionaly beautiful feeling at the end. Keep it up. 5/5

I like this poem alot too. It has a really cool feel to it. I think that you have a lot of talent and that you could make a book with these cool poems. 5/5

Well love, I have already read this poem, and it is just as good as I said before.

-Tainted

Another brill poem, so much emotion and it touched me, very good.
xx

This relates to something I can understnad, I saw it as how people can try to help others but it can't stop them being sad?
Lovely poem, you are a talented writer, so keep writing !

Kaylee,
I really like this poem. It has a good flow to it and has a lot of meaning behind all of it. I had to reread over it twice.

"Revive the failing heart that could
not beat without the touch of hope.
Pour these tears into the clouds above
then let them shatter to the floor."

^^^^I really like that part of the poem. It shows a great sense of pain. The whole poem is really good.

Wow powerful... very deep last few lines got to me there