Thats an excellent job. I love how you relate your life to a Vampress Unless you're like that which is cool as hell either way. Well you earned a 10 but they only allow 5 keep up the good work Vampress

This is a good poem. I noticed a few simularities and differences between this and my poem 'The Vampire's Curse'. It was nice to read a poem coming from the same angle and see the different and same things said. I think your poem has a more emtional feeling, where as mine has a more factual one. What do you think? I just gathered my infomation on vampires from various films, tv programmes, etc. Are you a vampire enthusiast or did you just feel like writing a poem about vampires?

Brad

P.S, Thank you from commenting on my poem.