A dance in the streetlights

by StefQ   Apr 9, 2006


Just the 2 of us with between a candle shining bright
As we're staring in each others eyes on this beautiful night
A chilling but pleasant breeze passes us by
And millions of stars glance in the evening sky
I take your hand and lead you to an enlightened spot
You're my angel; you're intelligent, kind and incredibly hot
I take your hand and we start to dance in the moonlight
Being here with you dancing just feels so right
All the people form a circle around us and watch us dance
Your body is moving so erotic, it's bringing me in a trance
Girl, I'd give you the world just to see you smile
Cuz life can be f**ked up, but you made mine worthwhile
I just hope you realize that you\'re my only one
And that I'll do anything to make you happy, like for me you have done

~PLEASE RATE/COMMENT AND I\'LL DO THE SAME~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, awesome Job. I loved it. Very well written. Keep up the great work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow this is beautifully written "a touch of sand" is still my favorite one of yours that i have read.. but this one is also brilliant .. great job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    I really like this. the only thing id have to point outis using us twice ine one line. seemed a bit,awkward? as said up above. i really like your description of things it really makes it stand out which creates elements and visuals for the reader, which is abosolutely great. it was really good.

    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Just the 2 of us with between us a candle shining bright
    I think with the word us used twice it was a bit awkward. And the cuss word in it but that's just me. The sentences though were vivid most of the time. Title: beautiful. Really.
    I don't know much to say than that

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw i loved this poem! very descriptive. 5/5**

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