Comments : A Moment Past

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetbutsad

    Brilliant, like the way its done!! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Thats sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    This was really g0od. a great use 0f w0rds. keep it up!! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Wonderful poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    I like this poem girl its like me and my bf you should read my new poem !!! please

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ahhh! I love that first stanza!! I thought it was brilliant, it reminds me of a song, I just can't figure which one. That was awesome!! woohoo this poem got me excited :P