The Girl Inside

by Rose   Apr 10, 2006


I go deep inside and i see a sad soul
That of a young girl crying
Reaching out for a bigger hand
Hence they are to far away
Will they listen this time
Will they see that shes crying
The tears will not be seen
For their eyes are closed
They don't want to see the pain
It will force them to remember
Keep it locked away, it is safe
No one can judge there
What they do now is not criticized
They know she lives with the anger
But to open this up is unforgivable
For they do not believe
And do not want to believe
But yet the girl still weeps

I go deep inside and i see a sad soul
That of an older woman crying
A mother reaching for 'her' daughters hand
Vowing to love and protect
To keep her eyes open and be by her side
No one will hurt you my love
I've seen with my own eyes
And i am aware!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww, This sounds like you have a daughter? If so, Shes very lucky to have a mum like you =]
    But I really did like this poem, It was full of emotions, And the wording choice was great! Keep it up =]

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    You are great at expressing emotions in your writing. this is very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very deep well constructed peice of writting. the flow is good and the content amazingly portrayed

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I really like this line

    A mother reaching for 'her' daughters hand

    thats me and my moms relationship.. so true.. and i love it again 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    This is deep. heartfelt and has alot of emotion to spread. very strong.

    Kat

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