by ShadowDancer Apr 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
His body and mind from battle weary |
Really great.. only suggestion is... last line of second to last stanza.. change it to |
by LadyPearl
Absoluting enchanting poem |
I really don't understand how you can write about soem magicakl thinsg you havn't actually SEEN and yet make it so... real! it's absolutely remarkable how you manage to be so detailed on the imagery. Rock on Rubz : ) Totally one of ur bets. |
Wow Ruby, you've certainly captured my heart in your poetry.....please dont kill me too!!!! |
Nice job. consistant, good flow, great concept. i enjoyed reading this piece. brilliant imagery. all round great write 5/5 |