Nice job. consistant, good flow, great concept. i enjoyed reading this piece. brilliant imagery. all round great write 5/5

take care - hannah

Wow Ruby, you've certainly captured my heart in your poetry.....please dont kill me too!!!!
lol
No seriously that was amazing
5/5 for sure
Love ya always
~Em

I really don't understand how you can write about soem magicakl thinsg you havn't actually SEEN and yet make it so... real! it's absolutely remarkable how you manage to be so detailed on the imagery. Rock on Rubz : ) Totally one of ur bets.
-Suzie

Absoluting enchanting poem

Really great.. only suggestion is... last line of second to last stanza.. change it to
"And LEAD the brave knight to his grave"

it fits better than "left"
thats just my opinion though.. good work!